An MBA will provide me these skills through experiential leanings, case studies, and coordinated projects with peers and interactions with students from diverse professional backgrounds.After having explained his skill-set, his expertise and his goals, the candidate now explains the gaps in his career that he needs to fill by doing an MBA.
Then, through his thought process, he goes on to explain that he realized the importance of managing the technology and began working towards that for the next five years.
This detail keeps the readers' interest alive that are now curious to learn more about this candidate who consistently aims to raise the bar.
So right after graduation, I accepted the position of an associate consultant at XXX, and for the next eight months, worked both as software developer and tester and thoroughly learned the technical and functional aspects of the credit card industry.
The candidate moves on with his story and tells us that he pursued his education in software technology at the university and then began his career as an Associate Consultant at XXX Company.
I am a senior consultant at XXX Financial Services, and my short term goal is to join a reputed Technology and Strategic solution organization as an IT Strategy Consultant.
Beginning your essay like this is like telling the whole story in the first sentence itself.This shows how articulate he is about his future plans/ long term goals.With seven years of experiences now, I have already gained expertise in technology consultancy and leadership.By 2011, I was already a leader of a Global Excellence award winning team of 54 associates generating revenue of M annually for my company.Thus, my passion for technology and my experience in corporate leadership has defined my goal. Continuing his story, this candidate explains how his passion and his experience have led him to define his goal of building his own technology and strategy firm.Later, I envision to leverage my experience in providing IT consultancy services to the world's second-largest bank and expand my company's consultancy services to large financial corporations, especially in the credit card and retail banking sectors in North America.